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Red
07-12-2012, 03:54 AM
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/3171278/Pictures/Signatures/shanasignumberidfk.png

Tell me what you think about it and what I should improve on.

Qwerty
07-12-2012, 04:02 AM
First thing that jumps out to me as bad is the typography, just do away with it.

You're lacking flow and depth (not that mine are any better XD). Whatever effect you put on the very top just kinda makes it unclear, like you're looking through foggy glass or something.
I'd suggest a more defined foreground and some more flow (nice job defining a focal though, your blue blob points nicely to the face :P).

Maybe a few c4ds, love the colors though.

EDIT: Erase a bit around the focal on some of the effects, it should help.

Red
07-12-2012, 04:12 AM
First thing that jumps out to me as bad is the typography, just do away with it.

You're lacking flow and depth (not that mine are any better XD). Whatever effect you put on the very top just kinda makes it unclear, like you're looking through foggy glass or something.
I'd suggest a more defined foreground and some more flow (nice job defining a focal though, your blue blob points nicely to the face :P).

Maybe a few c4ds, love the colors though.

EDIT: Erase a bit around the focal on some of the effects, it should help.

I really didn't know what to do with the typography so I just threw in something random. I'll try to improve on everything else though. Thanks for the tips.