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Lunar Noctowl
07-18-2012, 03:34 PM
its about a young zangoose that travels the world,and can turn human=as a zangoose he has teleportation

poppop1221221
07-18-2012, 03:49 PM
so how does it start out

Lunar Noctowl
07-18-2012, 03:59 PM
It was a dark and stormy night on Main Street,and a zangoose was racing in the rain! Right as it raced by a house it heard people yelling."That's it,sign the divorce papers now...I SAID NOW!!!"yelled a woman.The zangoose hid behind the door just as she kicked her husband out.(Screen pans quickly to the sidewalk exactly two hours later)A man,age 23,dark brown hair,pretty tall,but not too tall,with spakling blue eyes,was walking looking at a newspaper.A woman,age 19,long blond hair,skinny,but shorter than the man,with blue-green eyes,was running quickly,looking at her watch in despair.They ran into each other unaware that their fate was big.

poppop1221221
07-18-2012, 04:04 PM
man this is good keep up the good work

ShadowMr.L
07-18-2012, 04:18 PM
I'm lost a bit. Improve your descriptions then it'll have improved.