Glace
10-17-2012, 03:55 AM
Whoo, I did not base the title off of Demi Lovato’s song for all those that care. Bleah. I’m pretty sure no one cares, but just putting that out there. Anywho! I just came up with the idea of this fanfic and I wanted to jot it down here before it slips out. But two things:
1) It does not include Pokemon or anything from video games, anime, etc.
2) DIS IS AN ORIGINAL IDEA. AT LEAST, IT SHOULD BE. /caps
Chapter One
I finished the last lyric to the song. The audience gave a wild standing ovation and I just stood there, giving a goofy smile. One adult even shouted out, “DO ANOTHER SONG!” I shook my head, disappointing him, but then he lit up when he remembered I was doing another gig tomorrow. Then I curtseyed, and left the building.
“Great job out there, Lara. You get a bigger fan base everyday. Somebody’s gotta sign you up at their studio soon.” J greeted me.
J(his real name is Jacques, he insists on being called J) is like my agent, booking me at gigs around NYC and helping me develop my music career. Most of the performances I’ve done were thanks to J. He’s also my best friend, and has been since first grade.
“Yeah,” I agreed. “I’ve been here for three years now. Some record producer’s gotta notice. I’ve been getting more famous ‘round here ev’ryday.”
J nodded, then drove me back home to our apartment. “Thanks, J,” I smiled. J nodded again, then went to his room/mancave. (He insists I call it a mancave. Derp.) I went up to the bathroom and swept the wisps of brown hair away from my face, revealing my sapphire blue eyes. I wiped off the eyeliner, blush, and lipstick. Then I went to the kitchen to make dinner.
The TV was turned on, and I changed the channel to the news channel. I miss out on this because I’m out seven hours a day, six days a week. This girlie has to be caught up on news, too! I sat down for a minute and watched the news before making dinner.
Traffic. Boring.
Robbery. Happens everyday.
Music competition. Bor-Wait, what?
And I shall end the chapter there. Please critique it, don’t put ‘omgzzzz it’s awesome (dango)’ because that does not help anyone improve at all.
1) It does not include Pokemon or anything from video games, anime, etc.
2) DIS IS AN ORIGINAL IDEA. AT LEAST, IT SHOULD BE. /caps
Chapter One
I finished the last lyric to the song. The audience gave a wild standing ovation and I just stood there, giving a goofy smile. One adult even shouted out, “DO ANOTHER SONG!” I shook my head, disappointing him, but then he lit up when he remembered I was doing another gig tomorrow. Then I curtseyed, and left the building.
“Great job out there, Lara. You get a bigger fan base everyday. Somebody’s gotta sign you up at their studio soon.” J greeted me.
J(his real name is Jacques, he insists on being called J) is like my agent, booking me at gigs around NYC and helping me develop my music career. Most of the performances I’ve done were thanks to J. He’s also my best friend, and has been since first grade.
“Yeah,” I agreed. “I’ve been here for three years now. Some record producer’s gotta notice. I’ve been getting more famous ‘round here ev’ryday.”
J nodded, then drove me back home to our apartment. “Thanks, J,” I smiled. J nodded again, then went to his room/mancave. (He insists I call it a mancave. Derp.) I went up to the bathroom and swept the wisps of brown hair away from my face, revealing my sapphire blue eyes. I wiped off the eyeliner, blush, and lipstick. Then I went to the kitchen to make dinner.
The TV was turned on, and I changed the channel to the news channel. I miss out on this because I’m out seven hours a day, six days a week. This girlie has to be caught up on news, too! I sat down for a minute and watched the news before making dinner.
Traffic. Boring.
Robbery. Happens everyday.
Music competition. Bor-Wait, what?
And I shall end the chapter there. Please critique it, don’t put ‘omgzzzz it’s awesome (dango)’ because that does not help anyone improve at all.