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CChariz
11-02-2012, 08:40 AM
Skarmzer (Skarmory) (M) @
Leftovers
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 232 Def / 24 Spe
Impish Nature
-Stealth Rock
-Spikes
-Roost
-Brave Bird

Shell Boost (Cloyster) (F) @
Leftovers
Trait: Skill Link
EVs: 248 HP / 84 Atk / 176 Def
Relaxed Nature
-Icicle Spear
-Rapid Spin
-Toxic Spikes
-Surf

JellyWall (Jellicent) (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Water Absord
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
-Scald
-Toxic
-Recover
-Will-O-Wisp

Destroyer (Haxorus) (M) @ Lum
Berry
Trait: Mold Breaker
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
-Dual Chop
-Outrage
-Earthquake
-Dragon Dance

GunBug (Genesect) (M) @ Dowse
Drive
Trait: Download
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
-Techno Blast
-Ice Beam
-Flamethrower
-Bug Buzz

Wish Miss (Blissey) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
-Flamethrower
-Wish
-Protect
-Toxic

Will add descriptions later.

megagamer
11-02-2012, 10:41 AM
Uh...i think its actually pretty good. I think you should have Softboiled instead of Wish.

Zachgoose
11-02-2012, 03:04 PM
Comments in Violet.


Skarmzer (Skarmory) (M) @
Leftovers
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 232 Def / 24 Spe
Impish Nature
-Stealth Rock
-Spikes
-Roost
-Brave Bird

Standard Skarmory. I like the Speed EVs. =D


Shell Boost (Cloyster) (F) @
Leftovers
Trait: Skill Link
EVs: 248 HP / 84 Atk / 176 Def
Relaxed Nature
-Icicle Spear
-Rapid Spin
-Toxic Spikes
-Surf

This isn't working. You'd be better off with Tentacruel (or even Drapion) here

JellyWall (Jellicent) (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Water Absord
EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
-Scald
-Toxic
-Recover
-Will-O-Wisp

Toxic is not necessary here, because you already have Toxic Spikes. I'm also a bit iffy on the Will-O-Wisp as well, since you have Scald. Ice Beam, Shadow Ball, and Taunt are all good options here.


Destroyer (Haxorus) (M) @ Lum
Berry
Trait: Mold Breaker
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
-Dual Chop
-Outrage
-Earthquake
-Dragon Dance

I don't like Haxorus on this team, because it's slow (even with a Dragon Dance boost). Dragonite does this job better and fits in more with your team.


GunBug (Genesect) (M) @ Dowse
Drive
Trait: Download
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
-Techno Blast
-Ice Beam
-Flamethrower
-Bug Buzz

Never ever ever use Techno Blast on this Pokemon. It is not worth it. Give it U-Turn instead of Techno Blast, change its item to a Choice Scarf, and make it have a Hasty nature.


Wish Miss (Blissey) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
-Flamethrower
-Wish
-Protect
-Toxic

Blissey is okay, I guess. I'd recommend Seismic Toss instead of Toxic, though. You don't want to be completely walled by stuff like Heatran and Dragons.


Will add descriptions later.

If you make the changes I suggested, it should be a much more solid team. I guessing your general strategy is to rack up entry hazard and poison damage and let your sweeper clean everything up once the stalling is finished.