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Sn0wD4yz
01-30-2009, 11:26 PM
Time for my second RMT!
Reason for RMT:
I just got wifi and i want to create a nice overall team that will net me some wins, but i wanna make sure i have a good team before i actually make, just in case i got to change something or something along the lines of that.
So guys be free to make suggestions and changes and I'll be happy to incorporate them. :D Edits are in this color(Don't know the name) Pokemon that have edits may have distorted or false descriptions
A note before this RMT is even started:
For all i know(Cuz i don't know), this team could suck hell, but be patient, I'm not the best at making teams. :D I only got some Pokemon i would like to play with and made a team based on good synergy(as in types) and well yea, so yea.
The Awesome(?) Team at A Glance:
http://pokedream.com/pokerep/images/diamondpearl/front/437.pnghttp://staropramen.pokemonindigo.com/img_library/pokemon_sprites/373.pnghttp://www.smogon.com/forums/customavatars/avatar17967_1.gifhttp://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/alakazam-f.pnghttp://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/tentacruel.pnghttp://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/swampert.png




http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/437.png

Bronzong@Leftovers
Relaxed-Levitate
252 Hp 86 Atk. 80 Def. 92 Sp. Def.
~Gyro Ball
~Stealth Rock
~Hypnosis
~Earthquake
For some reason i can't comply with this thing's Ev's. I mean i understand the Sp. Def. and everything but i just don't for some reason, however since Smogon has been right most of the time I'll go with this. Nothing to say here really, i mean its the standard Bronzong you see everyday. SR for that sweet extra damage, Gyro works well with the stab and Bronzong's speed. Hypnosis to put other leads to sleep with this thing's boring appearance(No offense to Bronzong lovers), and Earthquake to hit fires and steels and rocks and basically; coverage.


http://www.werepuppy.co.uk/pokemon/img/salamence.png

Salamence@Life Orb
Naughty-Intimidate
252 Atk 252 Spe. 4 Hp.
~Fire Blast
~Dragon Dance
~Dragon Claw
~Earthquake
How does it feel to look death in the eyes? Pretty much standard DD Sala, with my own little tweaks here and there. I decided to use fire fang over fire blast simply to test it out and because it will get a benefit from DD. I also chose Dragon Claw over outrage because i can't even explain how many times my Sala has died in Mid-Outrage so, to prevent that i have given it Dragon Claw. E-Quake is for coverage over other types.


http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/212.png

Scizor@Choice Band
Adamant-Technician
48 Hp 252 Atk 208 spe.
~Bullet Punch
~Pursuit
~Brick Break
~X-Scissor
This is someone i wanted to try out after hearing a lot of good things about it. I wanted to give it enough speed to outrun Magnezone(Although i might have done the calculations a bit wrong...), but hey Ev's are seriously hard to calculate anyway and I'm not so good at math. A standard Scizor, Bullet Punch being the theme move right here(Or maybe its x-scissor?), it gets tons of power from stab+Technician and SD. X-scissor is for stab again and Brick break for coverage.
Basically the goal is pretty simple:SD up and hope that the other team don't got really defensive Pokemon.


http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/65.png

Alakazam@Life Orb
Inner Focus-Timid
252 Sp. Atk. 252 Spe 4 Hp
~Substitute
~Psychic
~Calm Mind
~Focus Blast
Aah, finally a genius. I chose this guy because I've been using Gengar way too much. I kinda wanted to make a Sub-Kazam(Like my nickname?) kind of thing. I think leftovers would be the right item to give it. Also I'm not sure about shadow ball or focus blast so its up to u. Psychic for stab grass for stuff like swamp and other waters. Also i wonder if i should give him calm mind in place of something so he can actually do something productive behind the ugly doll-substitute thing.Although it will probably die very quickly.


http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd314/MysticSparxman/swampert-1.png

Swampert@Leftovers
Torrent-Relaxed
240 Hp 216 Def. 52 Sp. Atk
~Earthquake
~Surf
~Roar
~Ice Beam
My second defensive wall i guess? I wanted something to be defensive just in case my Bronzong gets killed early since hes a lead.Surf and Earthquake are both for stab with ice beam for grasses(Even tho Swampert is so slow) and for *mainly* dragons. I gave it roar since i already have stealth rock, and I've been set up upon so many times roar is almost a necessity.


http://area5999.iespana.es/001-151/073.gif

Tentacruel@Leftovers
Liquid Ooze-Calm
252 Hp 120 Def. 136 Sp. Def.
~Surf
~Toxic Spikes
~Knock Off
~Rapid Spin
MAN! Don't you love toxic spikes? Standard Tentacruel, surf for stab rapid spin to get rid of those nasty enemy Sr and spikes. Knock Off for knocking off items-.-? This guy is for setting up toxic spikes too!(Duh).

So dis is the Team!
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Rioteer
01-31-2009, 03:20 PM
Time for my second RMT!
Reason for RMT:
I just got wifi and i want to create a nice overall team that will net me some wins, but i wanna make sure i have a good team before i actually make, just in case i got to change something or something along the lines of that.
So guys be free to make suggestions and changes and I'll be happy to incorporate them. :D
A note before this RMT is even started:
For all i know(Cuz i don't know), this team could suck hell, but be patient, I'm not the best at making teams. :D I only got some Pokemon i would like to play with and made a team based on good synergy(as in types) and well yea, so yea.
The Awesome(?) Team at A Glance:
http://pokedream.com/pokerep/images/diamondpearl/front/437.pnghttp://staropramen.pokemonindigo.com/img_library/pokemon_sprites/373.pnghttp://www.smogon.com/forums/customavatars/avatar17967_1.gifhttp://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/alakazam-f.pnghttp://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/tentacruel.pnghttp://www.pokemondb.co.uk/images/sprites/diamond-pearl/normal/swampert.png




http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/437.png

Bronzong@Leftovers
Relaxed-Levitate
252 Hp 86 Atk. 80 Def. 92 Sp. Def.
~Gyro Ball
~Stealth Rock
~Hypnosis
~Earthquake
For some reason i can't comply with this thing's Ev's. I mean i understand the Sp. Def. and everything but i just don't for some reason, however since Smogon has been right most of the time I'll go with this. Nothing to say here really, i mean its the standard Bronzong you see everyday. SR for that sweet extra damage, Gyro works well with the stab and Bronzong's speed. Hypnosis to put other leads to sleep with this thing's boring appearance(No offense to Bronzong lovers), and Earthquake to hit fires and steels and rocks and basically; coverage.

Standard, nothing to say here.8/10

http://www.werepuppy.co.uk/pokemon/img/salamence.png

Salamence@Life Orb
Jolly-Intimidate
252 Atk 252 Spe. 4 Hp.
~Fire Fang
~Dragon Dance
~Dragon Claw
~Earthquake
How does it feel to look death in the eyes? Pretty much standard DD Sala, with my own little tweaks here and there. I decided to use fire fang over fire blast simply to test it out and because it will get a benefit from DD. I also chose Dragon Claw over outrage because i can't even explain how many times my Sala has died in Mid-Outrage so, to prevent that i have given it Dragon Claw. E-Quake is for coverage over other types.

Have also tested fire fang, and it really is inferior to fire blast, especially if u count in salamences great special attack. Most steel types (which are the things u will want to destroy with a fire move) have good defense, and some are ev'd to live through physical fire attacks.7/10
http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/212.png

Scizor@Life Orb
Adamant-Technician
48 Hp 252 Atk 208 spe.
~Bullet Punch
~Swords Dance
~Brick Break
~X-Scissor
This is someone i wanted to try out after hearing a lot of good things about it. I wanted to give it enough speed to outrun Magnezone(Although i might have done the calculations a bit wrong...), but hey Ev's are seriously hard to calculate anyway and I'm not so good at math. A standard Scizor, Bullet Punch being the theme move right here(Or maybe its x-scissor?), it gets tons of power from stab+Technician and SD. X-scissor is for stab again and Brick break for coverage.
Basically the goal is pretty simple:SD up and hope that the other team don't got really defensive Pokemon.

Also standard, but personally I think choice band scizor fits him better, as scizor really is a hit and run poke, thanks to his low speed. You switch it in against something without a fire move (and weak or neutral against bullet punch), use an attack, inflict probably 40-50% of damage to the poke our opponenet switches in, then get the hell out again: enter U-turn. Nobody in their right mind will let scizor pull off a swords dance. Also, choice band lets it live longer to do its trick again. Great pokemon, my favorite in all of OU.8/10

http://www.legendarypokemon.net/images/dp_artwork/65.png

Alakazam@Leftovers
Synchronize-Timid
252 Sp. Atk. 252 Spe 4 Hp
~Substitute
~Psychic
~Grass Knot
~Shadow Ball/or Focus Blast
Aah, finally a genius. I chose this guy because I've been using Gengar way too much. I kinda wanted to make a Sub-Kazam(Like my nickname?) kind of thing. I think leftovers would be the right item to give it. Also I'm not sure about shadow ball or focus blast so its up to u. Psychic for stab grass for stuff like swamp and other waters. Also i wonder if i should give him calm mind in place of something so he can actually do something productive behind the ugly doll-substitute thing.

If ur gonna make a subzam, use calm mind. Always. A STABed psychic, boosted by calm mind will already destroy swampert, and without calm mind he will be powerless against the special walls he would have a chance against with substitute. It can work, and focus blast is usually preferred for coverage. I don't like the move, but blissey will switch in on you, and with calm mind and substitute, you will be doing damage. So drop Grass Knot. Also, you might want to rethink your EV's and nature. Leftovers on a poke with 240 HP? It's a waste, really. If u want to keep it like this, give him a life orb or something as to not affect his versatility, and sub will assure that he will die, but not before KOing something(s). As Alakazam has a base speed unlike mst other OU's you could swap some speed EV's into HP. Making sure he outspeeds gengar and the likes. You should realise that sub will make the need for speed a lot less because the poke switching in on you will get hit before ur sub dies. 6/10

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd314/MysticSparxman/swampert-1.png

Swampert@Leftovers
Torrent-Relaxed
240 Hp 216 Def. 52 Sp. Atk
~Earthquake
~Surf
~Roar
~Ice Beam
My second defensive wall i guess? I wanted something to be defensive just in case my Bronzong gets killed early since hes a lead.Surf and Earthquake are both for stab with ice beam for grasses(Even tho Swampert is so slow) and for *mainly* dragons. I gave it roar since i already have stealth rock, and I've been set up upon so many times roar is almost a necessity.

This guy will win you battles. I never used it, but I'm glad you see the insane importance of roar, especially on your team (on which all your sweepers require setting up, which will make it easy for your opponent to set up on you). Ice beam will give you the much needed dragon counter, and he is just plain and simple a tough nut to crack. 10/10
http://area5999.iespana.es/001-151/073.gif

Tentacruel@Leftovers
Liquid Ooze-Calm
252 Hp 120 Def. 136 Sp. Def.
~Surf
~Toxic Spikes
~Knock Off
~Rapid Spin
MAN! Don't you love toxic spikes? Standard Tentacruel, surf for stab rapid spin to get rid of those nasty enemy Sr and spikes. Knock Off for knocking off items-.-? This guy is for setting up toxic spikes too!(Duh).

I don't know how much this guy will add to your team. Not a fan of toxic spikes (heracross), but rapid spin is very handy, and knock off is a brilliant move. I'd say if u switch this thing in, using knock off before toxic spikes is better, and as you have rapid spin in there as well, I doubt you will get the chance for setting up the spikes much. And if you focus on setting up the spikes more, the need for knock off disappears. So drop one of the two. Tentacruel will not live long enough for u to make proper use of three support moves. In my humble opinion, drop this poke on your team, and switch it out for something like machamp, or maybe the less popular but more surprising hariyama. This way you can add a much needed stabbed fighting attack to your team, as well as keeping Knock Off, at the expense of losing a useless extra water type move, and rapid spin. I just don't see how this guy could really lift this team to a higher level. 5/10

I think the main problem with this team is that it has no surprises (except for a poorly worked out alakazam), and that the great pokemon you put in it won't synchronize at all. There is a reason people use fire blast instead of fire fang, there is a reason people use choice band scizor. If you wanted to be original, you would've chosen other pokes then 4 of the most OU pokes out there. So with especially scizor and salamence, use them as they should be used, like you are doing with Bronzong. As for alakazam, think about what you want him to do, and make him best at that. Your swamper rocks, and is the best and most important part of your team. The fact that something else carries stealth rock on your team helps him a LOT. Tentacruel is not one of my favorites, but I have seen it in action and I know it can work. I doubt however, that this is the team for him to shine in.
Overall rating: 7/10
So dis is the Team!
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