Feel free to post your edits, I'll add them in :)
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Feel free to post your edits, I'll add them in :)
I put this in the correct format for you. Have done nothing in the way of grammar edits though, figured I'd save that until it was done.
In terms of content, you have way too many slashes in the...
... where I've gone, don't worry, I haven't completely dropped off the map.
I literally have no free time right now between school work and frisbee. Plus my internet connection is a bit shoddy, so...
Pats all the way :D
American Football: Patriots
Football (rest of the world): Leicester City
Aerodactyl is available for reservation again.
Fixed some minor formatting and grammar issues. Looks good so far!
Les Miserables is a French novel by Victor Hugo that was later adapted into a play. It's very famous.
I have the site bookmarked... and I never saw the random 403 errors either.
Glad to hear the problems have been resolved!
Phantom: I didn't dress up for Halloween this year. My friends and I bought a ridiculous amount of candy and watched/sang along to Les Miserables instead.
Leo: I've been celebrating Halloween in...
Don't worry about it, I'm not anymore :)
Is there something else that could go in the fourth slot that has similar coverage but more accuracy?
Ok, I have quite a lot of comments on this.
-Follow the format. I fixed it for you, but we have a very specific format for analyses that we request you follow in the future.
-Don't change the font,...
Kronos, what can be replaced with Roost?
Kronos, I have to say your comments there are pretty unhelpful. If you think a set isn't viable, please explain exactly why you feel this way.
Added in the set in the manner suggested by Mike. Would someone care to comment on why the nature was changed from Rash to Jolly in the revised form of the set?
Guys, I would prefer it if you only reserved 1-2 analyses at a time to give other people a chance to reserve them. Plus if you're only going to be doing one or two a month, it's going to take a long...
It sounds as though you're saying this set isn't particularly viable? As a rule, we're trying to limit the thread to sets that are effective and viable in battles. If I'm wrong, you might want to...
Thanks Lapras!!
Pie is wonderful :)
And no, I've never played WoW or the elder scrolls games.
Kronos, why would you suggest that? Quick Attack has the same power/accuracy/PP as Bullet Punch, but Bullet Punch has STAB.
Just went through and did some final edits for this. Mike confirmed that the content is good, so it will be added to the completed list.
I don't see any problem with it either, as long as the original work is credited to him, it should be just fine. The edits and the validity of everything is checked, I'll do a grammar edit and remove...
Only as sexy as the person I care about most thinks I am.
It's the new badge that will be given to analyzers (see the thread on the Gen 5 Analysis Section) when they are approved to become part of the official analyzing team.