You obviously worked hard on this so it seems to be a waste no one is commenting. A few things though. Firstly that yellow color for the player's switching in is just blinding. I know because I made a warstory once that any color can seem to work because you have seen it so many times you now what it says, but to everyone else it just makes us blind. I like very much how you keep the chat in the battle because it was related to it, but you still need more commentary to keep us entertained and informed (the internet is quite the demanding bunch). Honestly the battle was not very good at all. Keeping Heatran on Politoed? Letting Breloom get paralyzed? Psychic on a Politoed? Small (or big mistakes) add up to a not so satisfying battle,not to mention there was a huge luck factor with the Paralysis which is usually a bad thing. On the bright side the pictures were fine and that surperior line at the end was a little funny I guess. You should write more !