Thanks for the corrections and thanks that makes me feel pretty good.
Phantom, I think that you have potential as an analysis writer, just keep working at it (and follow the format closely, as others have said).
Anyway, while I normally don't edit other peoples' analyses to change the content, I changed Hidden Power Ice to Ice Beam, because it makes more sense.
Some other moves that could be included here (on the analysis, not on this particular set) are Thunder, Spacial Rend, and Sucker Punch, either in other options or on different sets.
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Thanks for the corrections and thanks that makes me feel pretty good.
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Get rid of Ice Beam and replace it with Spacial Rend. The only thing that Ice Beam hits is Groudon compared to hitting Palkia and Reshiram harder, and I'd consider hitting them to be way more important than hitting Groudon when Scarfed. When Specs'd, you 2HKO the Behemoth with Dark Pulse.
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Why? It's a legal and more commonly used than Ice Beam. Plus, most of this is used by PO players. If you're going to have Ice Beam, then mention it in Additional Comments.
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canada: COG-MajeSan: I am not a child molester
canada: yet
(19:09:33) Eevee: i'm like
(19:09:35) Eevee: really skinny?
(19:09:48) Eevee: and haven't gone through puberty yet while some kids my age have